Daniel J Flosi is Consumed

Soy and Wasabi

blue ceramic dish,
last nights soy and wasabi
still stings the eyes

Daniel Flosi

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7 responses to “Soy and Wasabi”

  1. Ben Naga Avatar
    Ben Naga

    A STALE START

    Here we are it seems
    Stained with yesterday’s remains
    Dazed and misty-eyed

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    1. Buddhadoshā Avatar
      Buddhadoshā

      😋

      mist stale in the eyes,
      honey bee settles upon
      aspen leaf

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      1. Ben Naga Avatar
        Ben Naga

        You’re far closer to true haiku and nicely fashioned. Kudos.

      2. Buddhadoshā Avatar
        Buddhadoshā

        ah, I liked yours a lot! very fun to play off each other like that.

      3. Ben Naga Avatar
        Ben Naga

        Thank you. Yes. An ancient practice, I believe. 🙂

      4. Buddhadoshā Avatar
        Buddhadoshā

        And thank you! 😊

      5. Ben Naga Avatar
        Ben Naga

        🙂

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